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If Not Broke, Why Fix It

It's been a while. I've just lost inspiration for songs until tonight.

Chorus:
Excuses are my
favorite past time
Can't you tell?
Why not? I've become a pro

Cheater, liar and backstabber
the list goes on to even
worst names
calling me innocent is a joke,
slap in the face,
I'm good at this
I've become good at it

Chorus

Deceiving is fun when
it continues to work.
You can't depend on a
product of imagination.
Remember I'm a liar,
why wouldn't I lie to myself, too?


Chorus

Can't stop, won't stop
I'm not a healthy girl
I'll allow myself to die
before I allow myself to get well.
But, this is who everyone knows
Why go be myself?
She's unknown.

This is a very personal song. So, I hope everyone likes it.
Criticism is more than welcomed.

Comments

( 2 reviews — Review )
slice_dice
Jul. 30th, 2008 10:02 am (UTC)
I like this, though i would like a more prominent rhyming scheme. What is the melody like? Fast, slow?
flyaway_dreamer
Aug. 6th, 2008 02:58 am (UTC)
No, I actually don't have a melody for it yet. That's always been my weak spot.

Thanks for your input :D
( 2 reviews — Review )

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